Good photo! But somehow needs more communication. I can see that you are trying to communicate time by the footsteps. But these sort of prints cannot be on a street surface. Think more of the concept of time and what it means to await . Ifs it a protected world, are the sandals supposed to imply that. And what are the footprints implying? Maybe it can help to create a progression of images? At the same time think materiality, your character that is becoming free and the time that one awaits for the act to happen.Your visuals need to be show the emotional and physical depth of 'waiting/ Hope this helps to expand on your concept i assuming 'of breaking free'.