I would just like to clarify that I have not created this image myself, however I felt it conveyed the emotion that one might feel as you watch the melting of ice. Lawrence
Its quite a striking concept! Really like it. Progression of ice to water has always been a fascinating theme. But the image can do with some work. It doesnt communicate the depth and the intensity of this transformation. It has a certain style which I like and it can be kept abstract like painting ( which i see is your attempt), but how can it convey the beauty of the transformation? See the Jeff wall image at the background. Even though one cant see the wind, one can feel it in the composotion of the visual itself. I like your concept and your first attempt but you need to get more into it. Great potential!!